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Tuesday, April 12, 2011
Under the Sea - response to Jules Verne Google logo
Down here under there is a lot to learn. In the sea there is a lot to see every where you turn. Lots of colors and creatures all around. Fish swim around searching for food and go to their homes to rest. Pods of dolphins jump in the moon light. School of fish swim pass the glass window of the submarine. Here there is no poor or rich, there are no black or white segregation. Every day is a new journey,a new site to see. I dread the day we when I have to leave this wonderful place were there’s no problems that make the world separate. If only we could take after the fish and help make the world a better place for all of us to live in. By Tiffany S
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I really like your sentence "Every day is a new journey, a new site to see." That is a great way to approach each new day and each new topic as am opportunity to learn and grow. You also used some wonderful descriptive phrase to paint a picture with words.
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