When I was at my uncle’s wedding my family and I were swimming in the hotel pool. I was sitting on the ladder with my life vest. As I was kicking my legs in the water I thought what would happen if I took off my life vest? I slid into the pool just as my life jacket slipped off and I remember opening my eyes and trying to punch my mom’s leg so she could help me. She was frantic because she couldn't find me. My cousin Tracie noticed me and dove into the pool, and saved the day. By Kimberly
Friday, April 15, 2011
Risk Taking - quick intro prewrite
When I was at my uncle’s wedding my family and I were swimming in the hotel pool. I was sitting on the ladder with my life vest. As I was kicking my legs in the water I thought what would happen if I took off my life vest? I slid into the pool just as my life jacket slipped off and I remember opening my eyes and trying to punch my mom’s leg so she could help me. She was frantic because she couldn't find me. My cousin Tracie noticed me and dove into the pool, and saved the day. By Kimberly
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