Sunday, April 17, 2011

A Barren Place - Creative Writing - Science Fiction

    In a barren, dry place lives an alien named
Julia. She lives in the town of Nardor. She was
coming home from getting a laser shooter for her
brother. Her town in the tunnels was going to war
with the town of Dorf. This town was always in
war. Their leader wants to control the whole
world of tunnels.
   Once Julia made it to her floating home, she
wanted to give her brother the present. This was
not just any laser shooter; it is the new Laser
Shooter 5000. This gun shoots many different
kinds of lasers. These many lasers were different
colors and were made for the other types of aliens
that lived in the world of tunnels. There was
even one for Nardor aliens. This weapon is the
best and will help him fight in the war.
     Now, many of the towns were at war. The towns
of Nardor, Flipen, Tiner, and other smaller towns
were fighting against the town of Dorf. Julia’s
brother was very skilled fighter. He also had a
Laser Shooter 5000 that could kill all different
types of aliens. With his skills and the weapon
he was appointed to a General. He is a General for
Nardor Army.
     The fighting went on for many weeks. The war
was very destructive. The Nardors, Flipens, the
Tiners and other towns finally defeated the Dorfs.
The winners were rejoicing. While they were celebrating
their victory, they heard a strange noise coming from the ceiling
of the tunnel. They used their weapons to blow a
hole in the ceiling. Once they did that, they
were able to find out what the noise was.
They saw many creatures getting out of their
UFO. The aliens would now have to join together
to make sure their planet was safe from these
creatures. Would their weapons work against these
strange creatures??    By K.

1 comment:

  1. A well written story, Science fiction is a personal favorite of mine so I will honestly say that I have pretty low standard's and I enjoy everything. I like it how you left everyone wanting more.
    Adam H.
    Northeast Iowa
    http://kidblog.org/MrBoylensLanguageArts/author/AdamH6/

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